These are some of the words and slang I have invented to use in my story. I would appreciate critiques, judgments, and derision. No kind words please, I need to fail fast so I can get to the right spot. Places- Andella- The first planet colonized by humanity. A young, Goldilocks planet with one large continent and one large ocean. New Linz- A huge industrial and mining city. Home to a large population of colonists descended from European ancestors. Veldore- Small cultural center and research city. Home to the primary mechanisms of government and a population deeply entrenched in nationalistic beliefs. Concepts- Sepukai- A human who has a high chance of producing inbred offspring, leading to them being viewed as lesser humans. Synapse Soldier- A soldier who has been digitally linked to all available battlefield information, giving them tactical and strategic omniscience. Slang- Fuzz- Slang for Sepukai. Straft- Lobotomized prisoner. Derived from the German word Straffen, meaning tight, strict, or close fitting. Battlekiss- Military slang for being superficially wounded in battle. Lance- To melt or burn something with a heat based weapon. Supercharge- To fire quickly without properly aiming or even choosing a target.