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  1. TishaTrife

    TishaTrife New Member

    Jul 11, 2020
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    Need help finishing or changing this sentence please

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by TishaTrife, Jul 11, 2020.

    If it makes sense and sounds good, please let me know, thank you in advance!

    I am actually responding to someone's poetry that was intelligent and witty.

    I want to make sure it seems like a good response to grab their attention.

    I'm not quite sure the word "illuminates" is the word I am looking for.

    Maybe the word "piques" would sound better?

    My sentence is..

    "Intelligence with a twist of wit illuminates my sapiosexuality."
  2. Iain Aschendale

    Iain Aschendale Guardian-eating, tofu-reading dormivitus Supporter Contributor

    Feb 12, 2015
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    Sorry @TishaTrife, but our Forum Rules state that help with your actual writing has to take place in the Workshop, and to gain access there you'll need two weeks membership and twenty posts total, including two critiques of others' works. This is to prevent "hit and run" questions where we spend time answering and never see the OP again.

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