Hello everybody I am struggling to accomplish a story about vengeance and justice. My story in a nutshell so far: 1). A guy (Steve) is paralyzed and in a wheelchair. His brother (Eddie) gets killed by a gang. 2). After excessive amount of rage, and will to do something, Steve miraculously gets his feeling back in his body, which he slowly begins to train. 3). He trains over longer period of time and can finally begin to function individually. It takes some time for him to get used to it. 4). Steve begins gathering info and putting the pieces together, to find out who killed Eddie and why. 5). After some clues are found, a much bigger picture is revealed. A whole organization was behind the hit. It was all planned. 6). Steve finds out that the reason the gang killed Eddie was because he was onto something scientifically. He was doing some chemical research and had a breakthrough inventing chemicals, which can both be used as remedy as well as a weapon. 7). Steve finds the missing pieces of his brothers work, and works toward completing his work. 8). Longer period of time, where Steve develops his character, finds more clues and hones his craft. 9). Steve accomplishes his goal. He set the things right. He avenges his brother. He gives the chemical away to help people. (it can be a cure). He destroys the corrupt, bureaucratic organization, that has been defiling the structures of society. 10). Steve dies of a terminal illness, which A). he already had in the first place B). he got from the exposure to those chemicals C). or he sarcifices himself somehow for the greater good I have been toying with this plot for lots of years now and I sacrificed lots of plot elements, and started from scratch, to keep it simple. I would love some feedback on the story, and some questions so that I can clarify the story elements that might seem vague. What I am unsure about atm. is that Steve needs a perfectly good reason to spend so much time and energy and essencially dedicating his whole life to avenge his brother. Most people would accept (in time) the fact, that someone very close to them died, and move on with their lives, but Steves reason have to be bigger than that. He has experienced such injustice in his life that it has been eating him up inside out, and when he was paralyzed, he could do nothing but watch. He have experience similar situations when he is developed, and deal with them. He has finally the power to act. Any feedback is appreaciated.