Okay, here's the scenario: I'm telling a story in the past tense. The 'action' of the story takes place during a conversation between myself and a mall employee. Now I am giving background information about the day leading up to the trip to the mall. So now we have three layers of time. Here's a sample: See the middle part? Tons of tenses and I got super lost in it all. Any idea if I got all the tenses correct? Thanks. ~ J. J.