Hello everybody! I wonder if anyone could give me an opinion on this logline: "After being accidently involved in his girlfriend – a known youtuber – death because of a cockroach, young Ethan tries to find his happiness, while at the same time he deals with the antics of his workplace, a (really) late night live call-in tv show production." Some people kindly gave me an opinion to change to something like: "A mildly depressed young man tries to find happiness while dealing with the crazy antics at his workplace, a live call-in TV production." "Ethan struggles to find happiness after accidentally killing his girlfriend." But I also received this opinion: "I still have zero idea what Ethan show is about and why their is a death scene on youtube and how it all relates to his new job and again. Most of the time it's a guy lands a new job after his girlfriend dumps him. So I think you're going for a guy gets a new job after he accidentally commits manslaugher live on YouTube. I'm just so confused by the setup. All we know is his girlfriend is dead and his job, but no idea what would happen in a normal 30 minute show. " Thanks a lot for your time. I'll answer to any questions you may have.