Hey there. So I am writing a fantasy novel where I have the ordinary world of the teenage MC disturbed at the very first sentence. This disturbance is actually a bit frightening to the MC, so it causes stress whenever it happens. You kind of see the MC's ordinary world through the first chapter, but the three or four occurances of the disturbance shakes up his world a little. The MC also becomes a target of a bully due to his own reactions to the disturbances, which is important because the bully is a huge part of the story, but this also causes more tension. My question is, should the ordinary world be disturbed so soon? Do you think I need to slow it down? Would this this create too much tension in the beginning? You have any general ideas how much fleshing out of the ordinary MC should I do before he becomes entangled in a fantasy adventure? Thanks for any ideas!