I'm not exactly sure where to post this and if it's in the wrong forum, I'm terribly sorry. I was hoping that anybody could critique or give advice on a concept for a sci-fi/action story I've been working on in my head. Any advice or constructive criticism would be nice. The concept I've been working on was inspired by several movies and books. A deadly outbreak of the virus called (don't have a name yet; ideas?) spreads throughout Asia and the Middle East. The disease is airborne and has a 90%+ fatality rate. The World Health Organization begins immediate work on finding a way to stop the deadly disease, only to fail time after time at finding any cure. Within 9 months, the disease reaches Europe. Fearing the possiblities of an outbreak within the United Kingdom, England seals off it's borders to the world, letting nobody in or out of the region. The United States have led the Western World in the fight against the disease, while all along fearing an outbreak in the Americas. All shipping routes and plane flights to the mostly infected Eastern Hemisphere are cut off. Throughout the next months, the disease spreads throughout the disorganised African plains as well as throughout Asia and Oceania. The Americas and Britain remain the among the only healthy regions in the world. Trade suffers, food supply is cut short due to workers deaths, and civilization crumbles. When it is beleived it can't be any worse, the disease is brought into South America due to drug trade across the Atlantic. Albeit desperate attempts to stop the mutagen virus, it spreads into the United States within a year, leaving England the only healthy, civilized country left on Earth. Throughout the next ten years, England advances itself into the last remaining superpower in the world. The society, led by the untrustworthy yet successful Prime Minister Jack Gordan, makes breakthroughs in technology, medicine, and weapons thanks to a recently discovered fossil fuel (also with no name as of yet). These successes lead to the creation of the long-awaited cure for the deadly disease. The vaccine is mass-produced and spread throughout England to protect the citizens. Thanks to the cure, Prime Minister Gordan organises G.C.S. (Global Coalition of Survivors), a new government meant to find and organize survivors of the disease in an attempt the reconstruct the planet. This daring plan begins when Gordan agrees to open the borders after a decade of lockdown. The first contact is made via radio with a band of survivors living in a small village within Normandy, France. G.C.S. put together a team to go to the village to find and vaccinate the survivors, then bring them back to England. The team arrives only to find the village burned and the survivors murdered. Before they can even report back, they are attacked by unknown, bipedal creatures. Most of team are killed, but the main character and several others make it back to England. The creatures are actually extraterrestrial in origin. They have watched Earth for many, many years; waiting for the right time to strike. They have no name as of yet (surprise). The remainder of the story is about the team trying to find the origin of and fighting the creatures, locating survivors, and learning the truth about the disease (hint, hint). So please tell me what you think, as this is my first REAL story.