starting in minute 6:22. When I first saw that while playing bioshock infinite I was like. WOOOOOOOOOOW..WTF IS HAPPENING?! I want to add that to my novel! looks sooooooooooooo coool. I will write it anyways, but I want to see if you could describe that scene better. the clouds getting red, the horns, the lights...just that. its for my anime sci fi novel :[link removed by moderator] well take care, need to KEEP WRITING! thx!
Sorry to have to interact with you twice like this, but as I mentioned elsewhere, you can't link to your novel. You'll need to wait two weeks, get in your twenty posts and two critiques. Also, on a more serious note, no one here is going to do your writing for you. Once you've cleared your requirements members will be happy to help you tweak what you've written, but presenting a scene and asking us to write it for you will go nowhere. Just a word to the wise.
