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    abdirahman mohamud Banned

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    Query for romance novel.

    Discussion in 'Query & Cover Letter Critique' started by abdirahman mohamud, Apr 20, 2017.

    I am starting with the hook, then gonna do the query later so any feedback is welcome.

    The past comes calling on the anniversary of the brutal murder of her father, when deadbeat bipolar teenager Jack Jones bumps into her, on his way from rock bottom, as she recognizes him as the younger brother of the man who played God, killing her father for being a Muslim igniting a cat and mouse game of how her father was killed and how to get the girl for the clueless Jack.
     
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  2. Monteriggioni

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    Apologies for writing here, but for some reason, I cannot open a thread in "query & cover letter critique" group. I don't know why. I can in every other group. Does anyone know why that is?
     
  3. ChickenFreak

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    I assume that this is a forum in the Workshop?

    Start by checking this:

    https://www.writingforums.org/faq/writing-workshop.16/category

    to see if you've fulfilled all the requirements, and to see what to do if you have and you still can't post.
     

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