How do you keep your sentences organize so they wouldn't get mix up. Here is a paragraph, whic I seem to have a problem with. Far away in space, an alien race, known as the Elderons, is expanding their empire across three star systems. They wanted their empire to grow for great power. In their conquest for power, they encounter another race, called the Infinians, who resisted against the Elderons' power. On the Elderons’ home planet, a subterranean race, called Miarks, turned against the Elderon Empire, because they wanted to be free from slavery. And so a war between the Elderons, Infinions, and Miarks had begun. I'm trying to figure out how to add supporting details to each of my sentences. They just skip from one thing to another. I want to know an easy method to keep my paragraphs polish.