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    Need a New Word

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by Bosco, Jan 24, 2018.

    here's your chance to coin a new word.

    I'm closing in on the completion of a 1st draft and during this WIP I have been calling the hero's home-made conveyance an 'air bike'. This is a lousy, lazy moniker and needs to be cut ASAP.

    Some background you say? We're looking at an agricultural community 150 years into a world-wide drought. The young hero and his grandfather scrounged together a variety of old farm implements and one basket-case Harley Davidson motorsickle ('64 Panhead ;) ) to build a hovercraft of sorts for a personal transport.

    Air bike just seems lame.
     
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    I love it but....not sure the characters would know the relevance?
     
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    When I deal with a situation like this I usually start with a thesaurus and just go through synonyms. Maybe using words like glider, hover, breeze and stratosphere may help?
     
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    Since a chopper can be either a motorcycle or a helicopter, there's always that.
     
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    In It Happened One Night (1934 movie) a small one-seater helicopter type craft was called an "Autogyro" which I think may have been a real name for such a craft. So, perhaps a GyroChopper?
     
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    Heli-drive chopper?
    Heli-drive pan-head?
     
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    Maybe I should put all the suggestions in a hat?
     
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    Any of the above preceded by 'Harley'.
     
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    Aero bobber I could work with this.
    Airboss This too.
    Floathog. Gramp's is a pig-farmer so this too has potential.
    Chicken Killer
    Cow Scorcher
    Corn Burner I like the theme but we'd have to work the flora/fauna angle a little harder.
     
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    Stratocycle
     
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    This might be getting a little advanced for your needs, but depending on the tone and setting of your writing/story, is it worth considering what types of words these guys would actually name a flying motorcycle? Has society collapsed at all during this 150 year-long drought, are the guys who built it kind of 'country hick' style?

    The characters giving it a 'model name' sounding title like A Stratocycle or A Gravbike, etc (as per some other's suggestions) might be a little different from the characters giving it an 'affectionate name', like The Chicken Killer or The Hairdryer (again, as per some other's suggestions). I guess I'm explaining my point a little poorly, but I think you can maybe get what I mean. If they're slightly more bumpkin country guys or the setting is kind of a Mad Max world, they might be more inclined to name it something grandiose and 'badass' like Chicken Killer/Hairdryer, where as if they're more like civilized men of engineering, they might give it a 'real' name, like Stratocycle/Gravbike.
     
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    Oh wait, I looked through some of the other posts and read about the character being a pig farmer. Time for some porcine puns:

    Air-Boar
    Hoverham
    Pork Wing
    Black Gammon (if it has a sleek black paint-job)
    Sky Squealer (if it makes a suitable noise at high RPM)
    Smokey Bacon (if it has an emissions problem)
     
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    And that's the angle I'm taking now. We're only on the first draft and have plenty of time for changing things, especially names. The setting is isolated Mega-cities connected by high-speed rail and sparse rural food production in between; much like it is now in the American West but world wide and much drier.



     

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