Got a note today: "I read your m/s and have to decline. It was too technical for me in its present state with a lot of the action being conveyed in a Q&A format - this makes the writing rather pedestrian and obvious. You need to find less obvious ways to convey what is happening to the reader. Hope this helps, and I hope you continue to work on it." At least he read my novel. I've never even showed more than a couple chapters to others. I don't know what to do now. I'm 70,000 words into a new project. I'm not even sure what he means or how to fix what he sees as the main flaw. I don't feel like rewriting a book I thought I finished four years ago.