I put a story on this site with the idea that I was going to get reviews (which I did and found very helpful.) and to make changes to the story based upon the feedback (which I am doing). (This wouldn't be needed if I knew how to write a sentence in the first place) There are three options, which each has their own pro and cons. 1. I edit my first thread that I made which. It keeps the work in one area, and keeps it clean. Problem I have is for those who already have posted, it makes them sound like a bunch of idiots, which I don't want to do. I have too much respect for you all to do that. 2. I keep the original work up, create a new post in that thread, and people can comment below. This makes the above comments still relevant, and people can look at the old work and now the new work, but now the work is in two different areas and it becomes a little messy 3. I can create a new thread, but is this spamming at this moment. What I'm trying to do is improve my work without annoying everybody on here. If you have even a better suggestion, I will be happy to consider it.