I've been spending time going back through my WIP trying to add more scene descriptions. I've always been more interested in dialogue and what is happening in a scene. However, I've been told by a few people that I need to put more description into what a room may look like. So I added this to one of my scenes, it's far more than I usually put. (Future/sci-fi genre) William was a little disappointed with the room they had been given. It was the usual hospital type room, painted baby blue. He supposed he should have expected this. It’s not like they were going to build a special suite just for Gina. The walls held some monitoring equipment and a few notice boards for the nurses to post patient notes on. The bed was a bit scary from William’s point of view. Lots control panels and a set of stirrups. He shuttered looking at them. He really wished he could go someplace, hand out the traditional oranges and wait for someone to tell him it was over. He vowed to himself that he would stay at the head of the bed. The wall opposite Gina had a vid monitor and some helpful nurse had turned on a program showing the birthing process in full holographic detail with exacting descriptions.William stopped looking after the first thirty seconds. He was sure Gina was laughing to herself over his discomfort.