Don't get me wrong. I'm not trying to be oversensitive (and obviously I missed the initial rules- I did read the OP). I just would have thought a critique would have been more effective with a few more words at least. Okay, so we can get off derailing the thread... (and with apologies to my ex-forum- it's from a contest I actually won) It started as a beautiful day at Buckeye High School. Nobody had caught on fire this week. That had to be a good thing.