Share Your Last Three Sentences

Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Masked Mole, Apr 22, 2016.

  1. Seven Crowns

    Seven Crowns Contributor Contributor

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    Just state the thoughts directly.

    Subin turned over in her bed to face the wall again. For all her boasts about performing at the Sydney Opera House, she didn't actually know how to do it. She'd look it up in the morning.​

    The only other thing I nudged was boasting => boasts, just because of "performing" sitting so close.

    Pretty nice start. (edit: "ending." I guess this is the ending thread. lol)
     
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  2. Dalantri

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    I liked this. Even though it is the end of the book, it doesn’t appear to be the end of the story.
     
  3. TScream

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    From my Prologue:

    “What about Ana? Are you sure she’ll give him up?”

    “I’ll make sure she’s out of the way.” Esteban winked at Mateo then turned his gaze back to the desert, the blood moon emerging from the horizon.
     

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