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  1. Crawford81

    Crawford81 New Member

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    Short story Idea

    Discussion in 'Science Fiction' started by Crawford81, Jun 18, 2017 at 3:53 AM.

    So I have this short story idea and I'm not quiet sure how well it is. I was wondering if I could get any critiques on how to improve it. So there is a man who begins keeping audio logs and sending them to his psychiatrist. The short story would be set up as an audio log and then the psychiatrists analysis of that log. It would soon be found out that the man is the Vice President and soon takes over for the president who is killed after he goes crazy. The kicker is that this is all actually a simulation and the psychiatrist is in on it. The president figured out that it was a simulation and that's why he was killed.
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  2. Cave Troll

    Cave Troll Dark, is it not? Contributor

    Aug 8, 2015
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    Where cushions are comfy, and straps hold firm.
    Well hi there.:superhello:

    Sounds kinda complex and interesting. Sounds like a Mystery/Thriller
    kinda story. As long as you can format it in such a way so that it all
    works together between the recordings and the narrative, you should
    be fine.

    No to only left to do...
    bang-head-on-keyboard.gif~c200.gif Write it. :supersmile:

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