Hi everyone! I am working on captions for a video game trailer and I am having a hard time coming up with a really good beginning. The game is about a candy world that starts happy and turns into a war zone. Each caption has to be no more than 6 words. So the generalized idea was to say something like, "What was once a candy wonderland", but that is pretty lame and boring. I'm not generally a writer but just had to write a 9 page description for our game and Kickstarter and my brain is pretty fried. Can anyone think of a more creative or dramatic way of saying this? Any thoughts or feedback would be greatly appreciated!
If this is for a Kickstarter presentation will I be paid if they select you and you used my tips? Just wondering. There are places that you can pay for someone to put your presentation together. Good Luck!
