hopefully this isn't a repost. http://www.webook.com/WritingTips/GeneralWritingAdvice I found this site purely by accident one day. I was trying to hit refresh and hit my "stumble upon" button instead (addon that will bring up a random website) I thought it was pretty helpful. it has some good tips from some good writers. I benefited especially from the first paragraph which is all about how bad, and why you dont want to micromanage your readers imagination. sometimes less is more, that sort of thing.