Struggling with a Scene

Discussion in 'Plot Development' started by Sclavus, Aug 26, 2017.

  1. raine_d

    raine_d Active Member

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    Maybe make it less pushy, for instance something along the lines of "Okay, it's just that I've got a gift card and this looks like my last chance to use it...."
     

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