I'm still learning to write and tend to avoid dialogue as it always feels clunky and boring to read to me. So I've decided to write a small piece that requires lots of dialogue to get more comfortable with it. So I decided to write a therapy session which requires questions and conversation with no a lot else going on for me to get distracted by. The problem is, at the moment it feels like a script with who said what, actions and bits of information thrown in, it always ends up reading this way and this is the problem I'm trying to fix. It's 1,534 of dialogue alone. It feels like too much and it doesn't feel interesting or like there's much character depth (which is another thing I'm trying to improve on as my characters tend to feel 2 dimensional). Maybe I'm being over critical but could anyone help me with some tips? Thank you.