I'm wanting to write a scene where my main character visits his mother's grave shortly after becoming a vampire. Just for some background info. My character has had an extremely troubled past, his father was abusive to him and his mother. He's inherited his father's temper and is trying to become a better person but now that he's a vampire, that's even harder than ever. It's suggested earlier that he talks to his mother every time he visits her grave. However, I want to write a scene where it shows him talking to his mother's grave and tells her about becoming a vampire but is still trying to be a decent person. If that's too cliche, I thought maybe he could've written a letter explaining how he feels and places it on the grave? I really want to get this scene right so I'm very grateful for anyone's feedback. Thank you so much.