post it here and please make sure it is no longer then 10 lines I start poetry is pleasing the words it is using is light it wishes to convey heights without abusing rights or left is what it has to go out of sight
She told me that somehow, 'some day', 'one day', but now no way will one day, 'some day' come. The nightmare to make it to Monday some way. Dreaming, of seeing, that Sunday's done. Fighting to stay as I stay just to fight it. Another one passes, too many gone. A testament to strength if I'm stronger than my weakness. Either way I see, this weeks too long. Gotta be a man, on my own two, standing. Way too grown to be crying for my mum. As for the 'one day' never gonna come hey. Now never will I ever be anyone's son. Your getting in my business, just to take the piss it's, you being you so I just play along. I wish she was here, and you not there, if you cared I wouldn't care if you asked what's wrong.
I don't want to post it -- I'm really not much of a poet! (and also I might try to publish it) -- but I think the best poem I ever wrote was the one that inspired an ex-friend of mine to write a song that used it as lyrics. That was pretty cool.
I really like this one I wrote last year. Unlike most of my stuff I think it’s easy to relate to (if you eat sushi!) : Sushi Umami rainbow mansions glisten Arrayed with precision. I pincer my stilts between their alleys Eying the viands I meet and greet with a biting smile Plucking delicately Pruning the symmetry to fill my hunger, With a wash of brown, With a glob of green, I am wholly satified to end with pickled pink.
nice one. a couple of words here i dont recognise/know. I underlined them. viand sounds like meat but in french?! Umami may be the name of the Sushi?! Eving not sure. Is that a verb? much enjoyed.
