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  1. BackDoorMan1970

    BackDoorMan1970 New Member

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    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by BackDoorMan1970, Sep 23, 2008.

    Trials and Tribulations!!!

    Lifeless shell hallowed by indecision
    Walking<Breathing But lacking vision
    Years and Years of constant feigning
    WRECKLESSNESS!! Blinding Life's meaning!!

    Still...Years Later I'm Tired and Weak
    AND
    Simply it is only vision that I SEEK!!

    original wondering what u may think...Feedback of any sort PLEASE
     
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