Some good news: I queried a publisher and they asked for a more detailed synopsis because the plot I described briefly peaked their interest Some bad news: I'm having trouble getting the synopsis just right. I can't seem to get it under 3 pages. Mind you, it doesn't have to be under 3 pages, but considering that my story is only about 28,000 words, that seems a too long. I think the main thing I have difficulty with is that my book is written in choppy scenes with very little narration. In the synopsis, I try to describe only the important scenes, but since my book is so short, every scene is important. I've never written a synopsis before, and I'm uncertain as to the best way to do it. Any one have any good tips? Sorry to be so vague. When I feel better about it, I might post it on one of the forums, but at the moment, I'm not even ready to do that. Thanks!