Here's a basic summery of what my story would be about, I would like to know what needs improvement or if it's fine the way it is before I work on the first chapter. I really appreciate it. Edit: I decided to break it down easier so I can make better plot options. One is to have the MC born and conceived from a single mom through a single unfertilized male egg as an experiment or born from two parents a mercenary soldier and female rebel soldier. Which makes better story wise?