I'm working on a series called Ruin that's themed around human psyche I want my characters to be as 3D as possible, so that when the many events that occur within the plot lines do happen, readers will have somewhat of a connection to the characters, rather than just shrugging it off There are four main protagonists in, four different parts of the series, the way each one lives and act represents some part of humanity and society: Nicholas Blade (Age 31) - Primary protagonist, the symbol of depression. He lives life with a black cloud overhead. His life was destroyed by a plane crash and he never was able to pick up the pieces again. His ultimate goal is to find a way to reverse the severe damage he’s done to himself over the years of being a criminal. D’Angelo Peers (Age 36) - Secondary protagonist, the symbol of greed. He lives his life with a restlessness and is always hungry for more. He lives by a set code of honor and loyalty. His ultimate goal is to be a known name around the world by anyway he can: legal or not. His plot line deals with self-gratification and power hunger. Bobby Ricks (Age 16) - Tertiary protagonist, the symbol of ambition. His life is all about his ambition to strive toward greatness. His over-ambition eventually gets him wrapped up with the criminal underworld and he begins to go through the same motions as Nicholas. His goal is to be the best fighter in the world. His plot line deals with growing up, hardship, personal loss, and personal struggle. Vincent Wells (Age 24) - Quartary protagonist, the symbol of friendship. Vincent is a Reaver who has already discovered his abilities and is well acquainted with them. His storyline deals with a different world other than Nick’s world as he and his childhood friend Lanelle Johnson have to deal with Reaver’s (Humans with demonic influenced powers) in Jersey. He eventually crosses paths with Nick along this plot and the two become unlikely partners. His plot lines deal with maintaining the image of a hero and balancing that with his personal life and friendships. Can someone please give me some critique on these characters, plz tell me any suggestions you have. Also ask me questions too because the information I've given is paraphrased and there is more.