During a two hour workshop I give entitled “So you what to write a novel?” I’ve gotten numerous requests for sample publisher queries so I decided, what the heck, and put the actual ones that got me my first two contracts up on my website. If you need a sample of the style I used, go to Davisstories.com and near the upper left corner of the home page, click the yellow box “Workshop DVD.” Go to the bottom of the next page, click the words “Copyright 2010 by Michael W. Davis” and it will take you to a hidden screen that provides the letters used for my first two novels five years ago, Tainted Hero and Forgotten Children. Hope you find them helpful.
many of us don't go offsite to see what a poster wants to present... so, it would be best for you to simply paste the letters in your post...