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    Unbreakable: Take Two

    Discussion in 'Plot Development' started by laurasiren12, Jul 27, 2016.

    So I posted Unbreakable, an outline, before and I got quiet a lot of feedback and met by editor (Alex, you're amazing :p )

    So I was wondering what you think of this change?

    Was a Countess in Australia.

    She's now Countess of Bishopton in England and she's the daughter Duke and Duchess of Sandonshire. Her mother, Leonora, was given a title by her great-aunt the queen, as a thank you for her service as a mistress of the robes.

    So here's my question:
    • Does it now make it more believable?
    Thank you,

    Laura
     

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