In my story I have characters that communicate through thought, to highlight this I have just simply used slanted writing will this be ok? Also my problem that I am finding with all my conversations is the in-between parts. Should you always have a description of what the character is doing while speaking or can the conversation just flow do I need to always point out who says what? I personally think it reads well enough that you don’t need to be told who is speaking but it feels strange not having a pause in the conversation to say 'Jane stared out the window whilst they talked' or something like that. This is my first draft so I’m not too concerned as I will go back and fill it out but is it ok to go from one character talking to another character without telling the reader that this has happened?