...except without the groanworthy mythos. I really need a critique partner versed in what I'm trying to say, as it were. Anyone? I've only got 3 chapters so far. edit to add: I'll critique whatever you have, not being picky in that regard.
So with only three chapters completed, are you looking for someone to trade chapters as you both write?
Hey @Imaginarily , I'm interested. I've seen your work already on the forums so I know that it's my kind of thing. What sort of commentary are you looking for in a critique? I don't have much experience but if the story is the sort of thing I enjoy reading anyways, that's half the battle!