Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Michael Artzer, Feb 18, 2016.
Trying to delete...
Delete this and move it to the appropriate workshop.
For what it's worth, I read it before you deleted it and liked it very much. It's an interesting question and one I hope you'll consider putting up again (I've been checking the last couple of hours to see if you'd re-posted) in either "Erotica" (Level 2-3) or "Fantasy" and maybe leave out the scene so as not to upset anyone as people can get that way.
I'm new too - just sent you a message. Good luck with everything!
The full-on threesome qualified it as a level 3. But it's a 2 week wait for new members to post in the workshops, unless they are willing to become supporters. I'd be willing to critique too, but not here where the kids can read it.
I asked a friend of mine that convinced me to join in the first place about it and she recommended that I post the question only, since I am still vulnerable to people reading what I've written (new writer!) and a tad afraid from the criticism I've already received here - which I hope to do soon. Thanks for the help everyone.
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