Hardboiled sweets falling on a wooden floor, scattering all over. What would the sweets hitting the floor sound like? Trying to come up with words to properly describe the sound. PS: they are in a bowl which topples scattering the sweets. Thanks for any suggestions.
pitter-patter: can be noun or verb or there are lots of similar onomatopoeic words like skitter and clatter and stutter - could make a coinage or mix two different ones
Think of other hard things that fall onto hard surfaces and draw analogies. Gravel Shrapnel Sleet/Ice Marbles Ball Bearings/Other Hardware Which comparison you use will depend upon the context of your story/passage.
What kind(s) of "sweets"? To me, "sweets" could be hard candies, gummie bears, chocolate bonbons, petite fours, ... The sound each would make is quite different.
Thank you for clarifying that. "Hard boiled sweets" is a phrase I have never encountered in my almost 80 years on the west side of the great pond. So the sound is going to be something akin to a rattle, in my estimation.
My local dialect calls the “suck sweets” or “suck”, pronounced to rhyme with book or look. Usually used within the phrase “bagga suck”. “Ahm’a gooin’ dow-un Woolies forra bagga sook”