I'm having a lot of trouble with one paragraph that the editor tells me I have to change. I don't mind changing it to make it sound better, or removing it completely (preferably not), but the one she is suggesting makes no sense and contradicts some of what I originally had, so I am stuck. This was what I originally wrote: This is what the editor has: When it comes to fantasy fiction, illogical and impossible have nothing to do with each other. Even highly successful fantasy writers say that it's about the impossible, not the illogical. Any ideas as to what to do with the paragraph would be helpful.