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    Norcalangela Banned

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    Welcome to the Naka world

    Discussion in 'Fantasy' started by Norcalangela, Jan 15, 2022.

    There is a group of us "players" and we do this play every infinity or so. We play parts, some well others not so well. We change rolls. We are all Gods. We eventually will have our final scene together. We control everything. Heavens, Earth, and everything you could ever imagine. We have powers beyond your scope. I am God. We all take a different roll each time. Even me. The Gods get powers they each have to unlock all on their own. We have Jesus Christ. We have Shiva, we have Lord Krishna. We have Buddha. All the big players. We have 300 Gods in our cast. We have main superstars everytime. We just go around and around, infinity after infinity, changing the story line for the next player to pick up on. We are all done especially me. I am ready to die. We all are. We are tired, want to go to my Heaven and just be big kids again. Things have gotten too serious this time. We can't correct human errors anymore. We just can't do it. We wanted you to learn to fix your own problems. We taught you lesson after lesson how to maintain yourselves. You just can't or won't anymore. You have evolved beyond our interest. So we will move to my Heaven, Gods Heaven. And just fuck off. Play, sing, and frolic like we did in the beginning. We can't do that here. We are different from you. We don't know how to control our powers. In this play, Jesus Christ of Nazareth is God. He is the only one that I left knowledge with on how to get me to Heaven, being the first God. He has been working his ass off being God, then I got my memory back 6 months ago. We all are getting our memories back, knowledge of the unknown is unfolding in us. Jesus, believing he is God, is like, what the fuck, what the hell are all these magical messes arising from everywhere and has been figuring out, all on his own, as a human, how to clean up this. Magic is coming out of us at a high rate. He is tired and we all decided to call it quits. So we are coming up with a plan together, all 300 of us, how to make it better for everyone. We will entertain you still but in another compacity. I am the only one, being God and everything, that knows everything but can't speak it in English, which is my my first language this time around. When any of us speaks directions, it has to go through our translators to "God", Jesus. It is a very intricate play and directions we have established. We no longer will put on this play. You're lives will change dramatically from now on. Our newest Jesus Christ of Nazareth, will have a 2nd coming soon. God will make an appearance occasionally. Soon. I will be with our newest "God" when I die. Jesus and I will get to my Heaven first, once he unlocks his "mystery" book of answers I just told him about, with the text in changing tongues, and everyone hears their new directions. We are working real hard for you so hang in there. There is a better way to live for you. Our way. Imagine the impossible and you shall soar. Love the Nakas.
     
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    Are you looking for feedback?
     
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    Sure.
     
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    On the story, not the grammar.
     
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    The message was delivered to you @Naomasa298. What you do with it is for you to decide and will impact you for infinities and infinities.
     
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    Joe_Hall I drink Scotch and I write things

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    I don't want to come off as rude...but can you clarify what you are asking? Is this a plot and you are asking if it sounds like a good idea? Or is this supposed to be an excerpt from something you have already written and if so, and a mod can probably assist you, put in the workshop? And I know you specifically asked not to have feedback on the grammar but holy wall of text...there is so much there to decompress my feeble mortal brain is sputtering trying to sort out all the ideas that you threw into it. Is there any chance that you could post the cliff notes version? Again sorry, I am not trying to be obtuse, I am just trying to see what you are asking for.
     
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    If you want feedback on the story, then it should be in the Workshop.

    But as it stands, it isn't a story. There's no context or structure to it.
     
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    as Nao says it should be in the workshop - however so far workshop requirements haven't been met.. also i just deleted an identical post by the OP off another thread - please read and follow the Forum Rules

    :closed:
     
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