I have a story that is character focused and I wanted some feedback on my main characters so I know if and how I can improve them. So, here are some basic descriptions of the four main: Midnight: An orphaned fae that was taken in by the Wild Carnival. The right side of his body is human, the left is that of a humanoid wolf beast. He's kind, caring and polite but sometimes acts on impulse and has a sadistic side he tries to keep under control. He works in the "Haunted House" of the carnival where he pursues visitors. He has a rivarly with Match. When he learns of Vivien's murder he convinces the leader of the carnival to investigate the murder with Vivien's help. Vivien: A french/syrian girl that was murdered in carnival grounds. Her spite and anger prevent her from passing on peacefully so she haunts the carnival demanding they help. She used to be cheerful and optimistic but her brutal death has made her bitter and angry. Sometimes remnants of her old personality resurface. While initially cold towards the members of the carnival she warms up to them as time passes. She doesn't want to stop her murderer for revenge but because she fears they might hurt someone else. Moon White: The daughter of the leader of the Wild Carnival, and thus, the future leader. A serious and often in her own head kind of girl, she feels pressured by her legacy. At first she wants to just get rid of Vivien since she's sabotaging the carnival but comes around and decides to help her. Has horns in her brow and a pet bunny named Vanilla. Match: A witch boy with a ferocious rivarly with Midnight. He takes his job seriously but isn't afraid to joke around and relax. He loves studying the fae lands and laments that the carnival rarely goes there. He helps Vivien because he believes solving the murder is the best for the carnival and doesn't initially care a lot about her but this changes over time.