I don't know if this is the right place for this, but I think that what I'm asking for here is a part of character development. This is the description of a character in what I'm referring to as "my monster", that's not the title, it's just what I'm calling the project because of how it got to be what it is. Anyway, I'm not sure that it's done and I would like a bit of advice on what if anything is needed in the following paragraph to finish making her real. Purrrow would look to an earth man like some over-sized bipedal house-cat or more like a wild cat of the margay family with the addition of tufts of fur making her ears look more sharply pointed than they actually were. She weighed around 57kg and was about 1.7 meters tall with markings that many males of her race thought were very pretty. For anyone not aware of them, margay are a breed of wild cat that live in Central and South America. If you are interested Wikipedia has a photo that really works with this description, and believe it or not, I found the photo after adding the above paragraph to the story. At any rate, I'm hoping for advice on whether or not it is complete.