What's in the bag?

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  1. peachalulu

    peachalulu Member Reviewer Contributor

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    A bone knife with someone's name on it.
     
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    a bone - from a penis, a man penis bone with writing on it, probably the owner's name & a pin code for the penis. I'm thinking.
     
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    sorry, I pissed my bag.
     
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    Oops... Well at least I knew the name Julius Caesar :crazy: (quite literally just the name...)
     
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    There is a DVD that contains a clip of the recipient of the package killing another person. Also included is a note telling the recipient that if he doesn't kill the senders wife (sender wants to cash in on the life insurance) the sender is going to the police with the DVD.
     
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    You guys are great, but this whole part of the novel is throwing me off a bit. Maybe the whole thing just sucks and I should start again.
     
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    It is a trap, anyone looking in the bag is immediately shrunk, and placed in the bag. the current count is 24 people :p muwahahaha

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    4 Cuban cigars,

    a small roll of microfilm,

    an old faded group photo with some members circled, back of the photo has names and a date,

    an old tatter ships log with highlighted, and underlined entries, with side notes.

    map fragment in the log, with a small key attached

    and of course a fortune cookie....

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    oh, noooo I'm shrinking.....
     
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