Technically speaking, characters are always replying to other characters when they are engaged in dialogue, so when should you use "replied" and not "said"?
You can just about always use he said, even for replies. You should only consider he replied if the quoted material is in response to a question or a challenge. In fact, people aren't always replying in a dialogue. One person may be interrogating the other, or the participants may be talking at cross purposes. But a reply is a response to an explicit or impled question, and that isn't as common a part of conversation as you might think.
Agreed...but the general rule is, I'd say somewhere around 95% of the time, the speech verb to use is "said." Many new authors try to "shake things up" too much by avoiding the word "said" and using every other speech verb but, and the result is hard to read and comes off as amateur. Of course, when using a verb like "replied," it should also follow the rules as stated by the other postings. (It must be a reply to a question.) Charlie
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I think something like: "I love you," she said. "I know," he replied. Can work, as can short little blips of quick conversation, using replied does work, but I always test it to see if said sounds better. I general use said or a character action over things like "replied." I think I might leave the tags totally off more times than I use replied.
you may be confusing 'reply' and 'respond'... in common usage, 'replied' implies a question has been asked and is being 'answered' while one can 'respond' to things said, other than questions...
I agree. To continue your example, the following would sound horrible. "I love you," she said. "I know," he said. So 'replied' is really the only option in that case, unless you want to get crafty with avoiding a tag. Which, as the above quoted said, can work. I enjoy doing it personally Nate
What about "I love you," she said. "I know," he whispered. Seems to work just as nicely. Though I guess it would depend on the whole scene.
I don't care for it. I prefer a "beat" in this case. "I love you," she said. Eyes wide, he took her hand. "I know."
I don't see how it MUST be a reply to a question only. I've seen dialogue where someone replied to a statement being made, and it worked just fine.
no, it's not... 'he said' is perfectly ok... there's no good reason for 'replied' to be considered better... he's stating a fact there, not answering a question, though 'replied' could also be used in this case, despite the fact that he's really 'responding' instead of 'replying'...
I agree with Nate. This doesn't sound good. In this case I prefer replied, or whispered, but no tag would be even better. Something like Charlie wrote.
The question was when should you use replied, not what is the best way to write Unit7's example. Obviously, there are many different ways to write the example, especially since we don't know the full context of the two lines. Let's not derail the original question, although it may be played out anyway.
I am pretty keen on using "retorted" over replied or said if someone has asked a question. Is that amateurish?
Sorry, but yes. You can get away with it once in a while, but dialogue tags are one area in which variety generally works against you. The dialogue tag should not, as a rule, stand out. You want it to fade into the background, and let the dialogue itself take the spotlight.
Personally, I try and avoid those tags. I find them redundant. If the writing is clear enough, you shouldn't need them to follow the dialogue. "I'm not angry." Tabitha said. "No, but you act like it." Paul said. "What makes you say that?" asked Tabitha. "Oh, it's just your attitude." Paul replied. I find this too wordy. It interrupts the conversation between the characters.
I'm assuming the colon is a typo, that was supposed to be a double quote. However, asked should not be capitalized.
cb... you need to learn how to punctuate dialog correctly... don't put a period after the spoken line, when it's followed by a dialog tag... it's always a comma in such cases, except when the line ends in a ! or a ?... so, what you've written: should be: love and hugs, maia
I'd say the rule is, try not using any tag at all if not necessary. "Hello, Jack," I called. "Hey," Jack said. "What's up?" "Nothing much." "Come on, don't you have any plans for the day?" "No, and besides, you called me, so you had better have something to say!" I glanced about in a nervous fashion, "Ah. . . wanna go get some ice cream?" "I'm game."