I have drastically revised the first chapter of my novel, Red Satin Ribbons. The scene opens up by telling a little of what my MC is going through, where he is, and then it plummets into a rescue of a woman who is trying to commit suicide in Glenwood Canyon. If you know anything about whitewater rafting, I would greatly appreciate any feedback I can get on this action-packed chapter. Please send me a message if you have time to read it. I need you to insert any words or sequence of events that I might have missed during my revision process. Thanks in advance. Remember, send me a message, then I'll post the chapter.