1. Lone Wanderer

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    Who Do You Share Your Work With?

    Discussion in 'The Art of Critique' started by Lone Wanderer, Jul 27, 2019.

    Obviously most of us like to show off our writing that is WIP here on the forums but where else do you turn when you finish a new chapter and want some feedback? Friends? Family? Colleagues? Writing Groups?

    For me, my sister is my first fan of my work and she’s always asking if I’ve finished a new chapter. Honestly it’s very motivating to have someone who is invested in my story. Of course, she could just be encouraging me for the sake of it but I wouldn’t mind haha.
     
  2. deadrats

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    I haven't shown anyone my novel-in-progress. I showed someone the first chapter, but that was it. I don't really want it read until it's at it's best. For me, that takes time. And I would have thought I would finish the story before anyone read it, but I do have a publisher interested in reading what I have. I'm now working on those pages. I've been doing it alone. I'm not sure I need feedback on this one. I guess it depends on the story. If I had more time I would probably have someone here read it, but I wouldn't post it. I've made some friends and we swap work. The novel has been my side project. I'm not sure how it will go over with the publisher, exactly, but I do have an idea of his taste and we talked about my novel. I'm just going to clean it up best I can and let him be the first to read it. I did tell him it was a first draft. He just wants to see what I'm working on. I think feedback from that level will be cool, and there is no time to finish my novel. I want the invitation to be fresh. Otherwise, no one would be reading my story until it was done. I'm making up the story as I go. It's developing. And changing as it evolves. Also, people don't really want to read the same thing more than once so you really have to make sure what you're sharing is ready for that. Maybe your writing comes out fine. I need to self edit and rewrite a bit before it's ready for me to show anyone.
     
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    Friends mostly. My family really isn't interested in reading.
     
  4. marshipan

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    My boyfriend. He helps with editing, so it all goes to him.
     
  5. cosmic lights

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    I don't like asking people I'm close to because I don't trust their response. Not because I like they'd like to me, my Mum definitely wouldn't. But because they love me and think everything I do is out of this world AMAZING! My step-dad will say things like:
    "well done, I'm so proud of you."
    I'm like "Dad, it's cheese on toast."

    So I just post in online forums. I'm also not one to have a lot of friends.
     
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    1. I would not even think sharing my texts in internet while doing it. I don't even tell the names or topics of my projects in internet publicly.

    My previous project was SH. Now I'm writing LH. Next will be...? That is exactly the amount of information I think is wise to share to wide bunch of unknown folks in internet.

    If I even hope something to be published or to be useful to me, it would be incredibly stupid to publish or share it or central parts of it publicly in internet. There is absolutely nothing I could benefit by doing that. And there is a lot I could loose. So... I can't see any point in it.

    I don't even give electronic copies of my texts to my alpha or beta readers. They get printed paper versions. And they are the trusted ones.

    2. Alpha readers. Beta readers. Boring my wife to death. Different kinds of professionals.

    But not and never in chapter basis.
     
  7. jannert

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    Deadrats, your whole post is excellent, but I wanted to emphasise this part of it, which doesn't get said often enough. A beta reader is VERY unlikely to want to read your offering a second time, after you've made changes. You'll have better luck with this if you're writing short stories, of course, but practically NO luck with a novel.

    I'm speaking here as a frequent beta as well as somebody who has used betas for my own writing.

    The trick is, as Deadrats says, to make your first draft the best it can be, before you give it to a beta. Then, if you make changes, give the corrected version to a new beta. If the new betas don't mention the same problems the first beta mentioned, you can be pretty sure the problems are solved. (The new betas will come up with new problems! Rinse and repeat.)

    A corollary to this: Don't give your first draft to all your available betas. Select a few, so you'll have more left in the tank for Version Two, etc. It's a lesson I had to learn the hard way.

    A beta is a 'tester audience'—a reader who is willing to talk to you about your book. A beta is not an editor.

    If you exhaust or pester your betas, they are unlikely to want to do more reading for you. You want them eager to read your next novel or story, don't you? Make sure you don't wear them out.
     
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  8. EdFromNY

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    I definitely agree with this. I only had three betas for Past Grief. One was my wife and one was my oldest friend (we've known each other for 61 years). All three gave me helpful, critical comments, none of which were duplicated by the others. The ms was far better for it, but still not ready for primetime. So, for first-time novelists aspiring to commercial publication, I would add this: Good betas will give you helpful direction. But they will not make your project ready for publication. For that you will likely need a professional.
     
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  9. Lew

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    My wife @K McIntyre (Karen) and I exchange chapters of our WIPs. We both have two out. I have one submitted for publication, True Believers, a sequel to the Eagle and the Dragon a third done, and non-fiction Riding on a Light Beam on relativity physics 90% done. Karen is working on third, an American doctor serving with the Royal Army Medical Corps serving with the 51st Highland Division in WW2. We both critique each other's work, edit and skull-session with each other as to where the story goes next, and I help her on the military details and scenarios, also a lot of research. As our WIPs have already passed each other's muster, I am very comfortable about sharing it with others. I had a large number of betas that were reading E&D chapter by chapter after it was about 2/3 done, and I got a lot of encouragement from them., as well as good feedback. @Alan Aspie, I think you are a bit over-cautious about severely restricting distribution of your work. I won't put anything up on a public forum, but I do distribute via e-mail, and carefully keep a record of to whom I sent it. I require a name and address for those I don't know, a user name or e-mail is not good enough. As to concerns that someone may steal your work, you're the rare writer if your book sells well enough to make any significant amount money. People would be better off stealing boxes of matches than unfinished manuscripts.

    Karen has been very helpful with Light Beam, making it comprehensible to the non-physicist... target audience is anywhere from high school AP Physics to PhD, with something for all. Though she hates editing that!
     
  10. M.A.

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    You are one lucky writer, having a sister like that. I have a couple of family-members who are very willing to read and critique my work - in theory. The problem is that they have busy schedules, and never quite seem to get around to it. So, I tend to not get much feedback of any kind..
     
  11. Cave Troll

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    Mainly the ladies at group. But I think that might be the point of our weekly meetings,
    and the emails of chapters and such. :p

    Other than that IDK who else is really going to be interested in reading my stories.
     
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    Friends really. I found family to be quite unreliable when it comes to giving me feedback. The only friends I trust are those that I have known for years and those I know would tell me the truth regardless. One of those friends is almost a co-writer as he provides a lot of my ideas and is there a lot when I formulate my characters, plots, scenes, etc...
     
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    1) no one wants to steal your novel or your ideas
    2) if a reader somehow managed to track down your forum posts about your book (which is unlikely unless they're looking) it's not going to ruin it for them
    3) publishers only care if significant portions of the book have been made public, which is very different to emailing a word document
    4) you stand to gain a lot in broadening your beta reading horizons and getting varied critique

    This paranoia is unnecessary and it's impossible to offer advice to a writer who refuses to be drawn on specifics. If you've any intention of asking for help, you're going to need to recognise that ideas are ultimately worthless and spoilers for a book that hasn't been written aren't spoilers.
     
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    I share my WIPs with my mum, because she's interested in them, although she doesn't really give in-depth critique. She just tells me it was good, says what parts she liked best, and flags up any big problems she spotted. I also joined a critique group at university, which gives more detailed feedback.
     
  15. SpokenSilence

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    I share my stuff with friends in a private forum. One of them is constantly giving well-meant constructive criticism - however he's mainfly focussing on content and not so much on style.
    The other one just reads, but she never really come up with critique - ebem though I told her she could and actually should say if she didn't like it because it would help me get better.
     
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    I tend to share my work with everybody in the world who cares not to read it. I don't know why.
     
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