Here is a problem i have been battling with I have two MC and they are now in same area, Matthew is with his girlfriend while Simon is searching down a hole for food. Now I have written this in 3rd person but focused in on Matthew (as out of the 2 he is the stronger lead character, the story centers around him, Simon is a strong support character who is needed to drive the plot forward. ie survival skills etc.) Here is the sticky wicket. I have written the scene so it starts off Matthew is talking to his girlfriend about how he cant be bothered with the whole adventure and she is trying to settle him, So the scene is focused on them. However Simon over to the side has found a startling plot device within the hole. And i need to write what he see's as he is talking to himself. Now.... How can i write this without head hopping or doing the cheesy "Oh look what i found" tag Is it ok to mildly head hop? it's not so much the finding the plot device , it's more Simon reaction to it as it would be better to see the surprise and sadness though his eyes. But it would be a very short scene if i was to change like that as it would then go back to Matthews reaction to Simon.