I am writing an essay for my high school English class. I do not have peers to review my essay. I want to improve my essay by making the sentences flow together. Any suggestions? If anyone is willing to help I will post it. I am finishing the conclusion. My assignment was to write a personal essay on any subject of my life. The essay is about who I am, who I want to be and my aspirations. I have written the essay but I'm unable to improve it without peer suggestions.