Hi, I'm new here. For many year's I've been wanting to write a story. The biggest holdback was my lack of confidence in my writing capability. No one has ever criticised it, I was just never sure if I was good enough. As of late, I have decided to write at least for fun. Currently, I have posted my first three chapters on Wattpad, but I want some real writers, editors, publishers or even adults to read my work and give me reliable constructive criticism. Rather than post all of my first chapter one down, I thought that I would share blurb and see if it entices anyone to wish to read further. Please note that this is my first time that I have ever done one. The genre is fantasy. Title is: Alasnia The New world. It will be a mature story. [blurb removed] Thank you very much.