Here is a brief synopsis of what I want to write: I was thinking of a short story revolving around a girl realizing how crude and immature her "friends" are.. It would include imagery relating each character to an animal (Example: one friend was the leader who hated Jewish people and made fun of the size of a Jewish nose, but the narrator would note that this girl "friend" has a rather large, piggish nose and she was as selfish and hoggish as a PIG)...And the other girl reminded her of a snake, etc. She also could have a crush on a guy who she mistakenly believed he was reciprocating the interest, but turns out he looked her way all the time because there was a mirror behind her (narcacistic, very into looking at his reflection, into himself, etc.) Do you believe this could be a good read? Why or why not? How could it be improved? Plot-wise...There would be littke plot, more of a description of how the narrator realized that her friends were awufu and how she learned to move on.