Hello beautiful writers! This WIP has been going on and on since last May and I'm nearing the end so I'll soon start on my draft number two. What I noticed about it as well as others have pointed out here is that since I don't have chapters in my WIP it reads and reads until either the pov switches to a character elsewhere or an arc ends/begins usually with the following: ***** So I had the idea of titling scenes in the story similar to the bible's stories. The WIP would be broken up into three large parts and within the parts there would be scenes of say 5-20 pages and each scene would have a title (eg. Harold visits Goldenstein, The monkey situation etc.) I just never liked the idea of chapters within parts; it seems sloppy. What are your thoughts on this?