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  1. Torana

    Torana Contributing Member Contributor

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    Writers Trinity Contest Winner!

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Torana, Mar 31, 2008.

    Phaiyle ~ World of Dreams
    Nothing means more to me
    than the dream I used to dream
    The morn of stars and fiery orb
    steals my heart from sleep

    This mortal world of lies
    traps me in a nightmare scene
    with not an afterthought
    of the wistful dreams I dream

    And weeping deep mahogany
    I push my soul to silence
    In the sun, work to be done
    I force my sorrow aside

    I push myself another day
    and hope to make it through
    for when I'm home and all alone
    The world of dreams comes a new
     
  2. Gannon

    Gannon Contributing Member Contributor

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    Congratulations - hotly fought as always - good entry.
     
  3. K~la

    K~la Senior Member

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    Congrats and good job! :)

    I'm hoping to have time to participate in the next one, I haven't been around in a while and really feel the need to get back into it.
     
  4. Charisma

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    Congrats to the winner of the first ever WTC! :D
     
  5. Cogito

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    Congratulations, Phaiyle, well done!
     
  6. Neha

    Neha Beyond Infinity. Contributor

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    Congrats Phaiyle........the poem was an artist's dream........
     
  7. soujiroseta

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    congratulations Phaiyle. great poem:)
     
  8. Heather Louise

    Heather Louise Contributing Member Contributor

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    Congrats Phaiyle, sorry it is a little belated, never noticed the thread. :)

    Heather
     
  9. icesky

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    great poem reminded me of shelley
     
  10. JustAMatterOfTime

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    Wow you're really good. Wish i could write like this. Well done.
     
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