Before I get into my question about the tips and suggestions on this episode, I want to say that I drove myself to a 24 hour Walgreens where I carried out the ending of my screenplay/episode. I slept with the sampler pages I wrote last night and had a special lunch with the screenplay the next afternoon. I hope to have more moments like this with screenplays in the future. Anyways, to my question : the suggestions I'm looking for is for an episode I'm writing about a character that is pursuing an internet movie critique club, so he can quit his job at Taco Stan and make a living doing movie critique videos. But, when he loses his best friend, gets grounded and crosses his sociopathic sister. He becomes desperate to take matters into his own hands. The ending I have so far is after his sociopathic sister gets herself grounded, she convinces herself that her older brother got her grounded; therefore, putting him in the hospital where she chases and fights him as he continues to record and pursue his passion, even while being chased with a gun and knife. Basic logline: The protagonist is driven to get his movie critique videos online so he can quit his job at Taco Stan, but all comes to a disastrous halt when he loses his best friend and gets grounded. What would be your guys' tips or suggestions on a good or interesting ending for this episode?