Hi All, I am writing my first story and I am having some difficulties about how to set up the inner thoughts of the character. I have wrote what is happening and then added her inner thoughts in italics, but I have added this on the same line, should I be starting this on a new line. I will leave an example below; Listening to the sounds of passing cars, rushing buses and busy mothers with their children, she half smiled to herself knowing that people hated this weather. They should move somewhere warmer, it’s October in Britain what do you expect. How is this? Thank you.