Okay, so for a while I've been wanting to write a cannibal story. I've managed to gather together a context and a plot and I would like if somebody could give me their opinion on it. Questions would brilliant to help me think from different angles :] Summary: Lucas wakes up every morning to the life he hates. Trapped in a marriage with a woman he hates, he throws his life into writing and staying out the house as much as possible. The only reason he stays is his teenage daughter, Ruby. Returning home one evening, he expects to find his daughter in her room with her music blaring. Instead, he finds his wife hysterical, clutching a shoe box with a letter taped on the lid. Inside the shoebox is clumps of his daughter's hair. Day by day, parts of his daughter is sent to the family home in shoeboxes, each with letters taped to the front. The letters soon spells out the name of a village that Lydia, Lucas's wife, recognises. Out of fear of what the kidnapper will send them next, Lucas puts his hatred for his wife behind him and sets out to find his daughter. Only, Ruby isn't the only target of a psychopath. A group of mutant cannibals are following Lucas on his journey and he's sure they're something to do with his daughter's disapperance. The mutant cannibals have a history too: They originated by an illegal experiment carried out by an underground group of scientists. Parents who had children born with chromosomal abnormalities had handed their children over to the group out of disgust. The scientists researched the abnormalities and began experimenting on test tube babies carrying the abnormal genes. Eventually, they were successful. They noted strange characteristics, such as the ability to move freakishly fast or to bleed continuously without further symptom. The more the experiments carried on, the more the group got worried about the strength of their creations. They finally decided to abandon ship and dumped the mutated test tube children on a remote Scottish Island and left the country. However, some of the children survived and due to their freak strength and untraditional upbringing, found them with a taste for violence and human blood.